After school, I usually go to my home and take a rest. I am very tired so I laying on my bed and use my phone. Sometimes I do my homework but I don’t like do it. My mother always tell me to finish my homework first before I play games. After that, I eating dinner with my family and watching TV together. It is make me feel happy and relax.

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Student’s Sentence: After school, I usually go to my home and take a rest.
Corrected Sentence: After school, I usually go home and take a rest.
Grammar Explanation: “Home” does not need “to” or “my” in this context.
Better Sentence: After school, I usually go home and take a short rest.

Student’s Sentence: I am very tired so I laying on my bed and use my phone.
Corrected Sentence: I am very tired, so I lie on my bed and use my phone.
Grammar Explanation: Use base verb “lie,” not “laying,” and keep verb forms consistent.
Better Sentence: I am usually very tired, so I lie on my bed and use my phone.

Student’s Sentence: Sometimes I do my homework but I don’t like do it.
Corrected Sentence: Sometimes I do my homework, but I don’t like to do it.
Grammar Explanation: Use “to do” after “like.”
Better Sentence: Sometimes I do my homework, but I don’t enjoy doing it.

Student’s Sentence: My mother always tell me to finish my homework first before I play games.
Corrected Sentence: My mother always tells me to finish my homework first before I play games.
Grammar Explanation: “Mother” is singular, so use “tells.”
Better Sentence: My mother always tells me to finish my homework before playing games.

Student’s Sentence: After that, I eating dinner with my family and watching TV together.
Corrected Sentence: After that, I eat dinner with my family and watch TV together.
Grammar Explanation: Use base verbs “eat” and “watch” for present simple tense.
Better Sentence: After that, I eat dinner with my family and watch TV together.

Student’s Sentence: It is make me feel happy and relax.
Corrected Sentence: It makes me feel happy and relaxed.
Grammar Explanation: Remove “is” and use adjective “relaxed,” not “relax.”
Better Sentence: It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day.

Better Paragraph:
After school, I usually go home and take a short rest. I am usually very tired, so I lie on my bed and use my phone. Sometimes I do my homework, but I don’t enjoy doing it. My mother always tells me to finish my homework before playing games. After that, I eat dinner with my family and watch TV together. It makes me feel happy and relaxed after a long day.